Taylor Swift
Speak Now
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by Jonathan Keefe on October 25, 2010
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A quick heads-up to Sugarland: This is how an ostensible country act makes a full-on pop album that sounds contemporary and relevant. That comparison may not be fair, given that Taylor Swift in one of the biggest stars in either pop or country at the moment. But Speak Now is an album of expertly crafted pop music that actually justifies at least some of the critical hyperbole and commercial clout that have characterized the last two years of Swift's career. The album is still problematic in precisely the same ways that its two predecessors were, but Speak Now also finds Swift doing the things that she does well even better than she ever has before.

What that means is that there isn't a song on the album that isn't an absolute wonder of technical construction. In terms of her ability to write an indelible melody, Swift rivals power-pop acts like Fountains of Wayne and Guster, and songs like "Back to December" and "Speak Now" showcase Swift's unique knack for matching the overall tone of a melody to the broader themes of a song. It isn't easy to make a melancholy song like "Back to December" sound catchy at the same time, but that's what Swift does, and it's an impressive trick.

Perhaps even more impressive, though, is her mastery of song structure. It isn't just about writing a clever lyric or melodic figure to serve as a hook, though Swift certainly does both. Instead, it's a matter of placing those hooks at exactly the right moment in a song and ensuring that the arrangement and production add just the right amount of punch. Swift and producer Nathan Chapman are simply better at writing hooks and showcasing hooks, respectively, than just about any other team in contemporary pop, and they somehow make that seem effortless over the course of the album.

Consider lead single "Mine," on which the standout line in the refrain ("You made a rebel of a careless man's careful daughter") is the only one in which Swift's vocals are double-tracked. Or how the instrumentation drops out during the last two words of the hook in "Last Kiss," allowing Swift's breathy vocal delivery to bear the entirety of the song's emotional weight. Or how a simple acoustic guitar figure on "Enchanted" slowly crescendos behind each repetition of the line "I was enchanted to meet you." These are deliberate songwriting and production choices, not happy accidents or the work of someone who approaches pop music casually. In terms of its construction, Speak Now is a studied, smart album that is easily the best, most dense work of Swift's career so far.

Unfortunately, the greater complexity and range found in Swift's sound and in her song constructions doesn't necessarily translate to her songwriting. One of the many lingering questions about Swift's potential shelf life as a recording artist has been whether or not her ability to channel the "one of us" teen experiences into pop songs would extend into adulthood. Moreover, Swift's transformation into a global star has placed a significant limitation on her opportunities for the everyday, relatable experiences that have informed her best songs. Will the same audience that was so enamored of Swift's tales of awkward teenage angst also go for songs about a series of high-profile celebrity boyfriends?

On Speak Now, Swift seems eager to find out. She remains open about using simple, first-person musings on love and boys as the primary focus of her songs. This time out, that single-minded focus means that, instead of a high school crush and stuck-up cheerleaders, she's writing about a feud with Kanye West and relationships with Joe Jonas, Cory Monteith, and John Mayer. "Dear John," about Mayer, has been the most buzzed-about track leading up to the album's release, and it's a slight departure for Swift. She's a lot of things, but subtle isn't one of them, and it's impossible to think of the song as directed toward anyone but Mayer, especially since she and Chapman give the track a fuzzy blues-pop arrangement that could've been lifted directly from Mayer's Continuum.

On one hand, it's easy to sympathize with Swift, as she laments her "blind optimism," since Mayer's entire public persona is built on being a rakish dick. But the song also reflects several of Swift's chief limitations as a songwriter. Her narrators often seem to lack insight because Swift writes with the point of view that hers is the only story to be told, which makes a song like "Dear John" or "Better Than Revenge" come across as shallow and shortsighted. She often comes up with a great, revealing line ("The organ starts to play a song/That sounds like a death march," from "Speak Now" is just perfect), but there isn't much in the way of emotional depth or maturity to these songs. If there's something of the modern "No, I'm right, and you should just shut up" zeitgeist reflected in Swift's perspective, it's also easy to wish that a writer of her obvious smarts delved into more substance and developed a more fully informed take on matters of life and love.

To that end, it's also troubling that Swift's songs still uniformly build an artistic persona that is defined exclusively by her relationships with men. A song like "Enchanted" or "Speak Now" may work brilliantly on its own merits, but over the course of three albums, Swift hasn't shown that she can write authoritatively about anything other than how great boys are or how much boys suck or how dreams about boys will take her somewhere better than where she is now. "The Story of Us" and "Better Than Revenge" describe a young woman who is at turns sharp and snide, but who is nonetheless defined by relationships. Even the confessional "Never Grow Up" turns on memories of "what it sounded like when your dad gets home" and "your little brother's favorite songs."

That lack of self-awareness comes to a head on "Mean." While Bob Lefsetz has gone on record to claim that the song is specifically about him, it isn't like he's the only person to voice a negative opinion of Swift over the last several years. To that end, the album's punch line, "Drunk and grumbling on about how I can't sing," comes across just as smug as Swift accuses her critics as being. Instead of actually doing something to improve on her inability to find or hold pitch consistently, Swift has simply written a song about how it's "mean" for people to point out that problem. But it stands to reason that someone who chooses a career as a recording artist might be judged for his or her ability to sing well, and the fact that Swift remains a technically poor singer negatively impacts the overall quality of Speak Now, and that's neither unfair nor mean to point out.

Though she does vary her phrasing in ways that attempt to mask her limited voice (the way she sneers, "She looks at me like I'm a trend/And she's so over it," on "Better Than Revenge" is especially effective), Swift is still noticeably off-pitch at least once on every song on the album. The simple fact that she's written a song that uses juvenile ad-hominem attacks to dismiss anyone who might say so doesn't make it any less of a liability. It's a real problem. So is the fact that the message of "Mean" flies in the face of much of Speak Now and the rest of Swift's catalogue. Considering the patronizing, condescending sermon she's written for West on "Innocent," or the way she goes for the jugular on "Better Than Revenge," "Speak Now," and "Dear John," it's hypocritical for Swift to call anyone else out for saying something negative, since that's kind of her M.O.

While it's possible to say that Swift writes what she knows and that she writes it well, it's just as possible to say that she has a limited repertoire. Speak Now proves that she didn't use up an entire lifetime's worth of references to dancing or kissing in the rain on Fearless. Though she confines the fairy-tale imagery of her earlier work to "Enchanted" and "Long Live," she replaces it with several lines about fireworks, and each of the album's first three songs speak of someone who is "guarded." To her credit, she doesn't mix any metaphors this time out, but her lyrics generally lack the variety and sophistication of her compositions.

Speak Now is no pop masterpiece, though it's sure to be hailed as such in some circles. But it's an album that finds Swift getting an awful lot of difficult stuff right, and it makes it clear what she still needs to develop in order to refine her craft even further. That literally every song on the album sounds like a viable radio single should buy Swift another couple of years to develop an even more mature, less me-first-all-the-time perspective and, hopefully, to work with a vocal coach.


  • Label: Big Machine
  • Release Date: October 25, 2010


Comments

MichelleF on October 25, 2010, 09:52 PM

This article is a perfect review of the album. First of all, why is her album labeled as country when it's clearly a pop album? Is this just so she can sell even more albums and so she can win country awards? Also, her lyrics are always the same and they are always about guys. I also agree that she is very hypocritical in many of her songs. They make her sound so cocky. And of course, she still can't sing, even if she thinks it's mean to say that.

Jason E on October 26, 2010, 08:17 PM

I'm surprised you didn't mention how similar many of her songs sound. When a song of hers comes on the radio, I often can't tell what song it is until it hits the chorus. Many of them build similarly.

dusankapotkonjak@yahoo.com on October 26, 2010, 11:00 PM

I love Taylor's new album! Maybe she is not for everyone, but for people who like her, you will love her new album! What a poetess!!!!

Jonathan Keefe on October 27, 2010, 12:45 PM

@ Michelle:

I've never bought into Swift as a country artist, but, to her credit, I don't think she really puts too much stock in that particular tag, either. Still, the production on "Mean" makes it the most country-sounding song in her entire catalogue, and that gives this album at least one more country song than the new Sugarland trainwreck.

@ Jason:

That's actually much less of a problem on this album than it has been on the previous two. She still structures her songs using some familiar patterns and tricks (such as having the "boy" in any particular song be the one who delivers the final chorus as a reversal), but the production is much more varied, and that helps. "Mine" is really the only song that fits perfectly along that "Love Story" and "Our Song" and "You Belong With Me" axis that you're (correctly) thinking about.

@dusanetc.

"Poetess"? Be honest now: Oprah, is that you?

Jason E on October 27, 2010, 08:42 PM

Jonathan, I can see that, but I'd say parts of "Speak Now" (if nothing else) are similar melodically to "You Belong With Me."

2B on October 28, 2010, 10:24 AM

Brilliantly crafted article. But look out, you pointed out that Ms. Swift is condescending, snide, smug, off-pitch, and although you began with some overly-generous compliments, you will probably be the next person to appear in "another boy did me wrong" song. Thank you for articulating that Ms. Swift writes from an imperious position, and I might add, a rather mean one at that. I'm still trying to figure out how a privileged young woman whose family dedicated their lives to promote her and market her can have such a big chip on her shoulder. Worse yet, America buys into it.

MichelleF on October 30, 2010, 01:17 PM

"I've never bought into Swift as a country artist, but, to her credit, I don't think she really puts too much stock in that particular tag, either."

I'm going to have to disagree with this. When she wins awards outside of country music awards, she always says "I'm a country artist," or "I sing country music," acting like it's such a big deal that she won this type award when she's just a little ol' country artist, when she isn't.

And still, why not label the album as pop rather than country then? It's like they're just using country as something to fall back on. She can break a lot of the records set in country music because she is labeled as country when she is really pop. Also, the way "Mine" as been 'pushed' on country radio this past week has been so obvious and pathetic. It's like her label must get it to #1 since it didn't get to #1 on pop.

I do agree with you that Sugarland's new album isn't country either though.

kari on November 9, 2010, 11:59 AM

Hi, Jonathan.

I think you're too kind to TS here. But I'll admit up front that I'm just flat-out baffled by the fact that she's on the radio and selling millions. I don't think any of her songs sound like radio singles. (Although it's true that the lyrics to "Back to December" were better on the page than they sounded on radio. But then I scrolled on to "Mean," and ...oh, lord.)

This is the first time I've visited Slant Magazine. I came from a link to yr comments on Easton Corbin's song "A Little More Country Than That," which I quite enjoy. Do you really think TS's songs are better-crafted than that one?

Tx—all the best.

Jonathan Keefe on November 13, 2010, 04:06 PM

@ Jason:

I've gone back to re-listed to "Speak Now" v "You Belong With Me" a couple of times now, and I can hear at least some similarity between the melodies of those two songs in their respective choruses. But is that a matter of Swift repeating herself or of knowing that her vocal range is limited and trying to maneuver within that narrow range?

@ 2B:

Eh. I'm not terribly worried about that actually happening, especially since this review is more favorable than what I had to say about her previous album. But you raise an interesting point about why someone with Swift's personal privilege might carry the kind of grudges that she often seems to hold. That's a through-line that will be worth following as she continues to mature.

@ Michelle:

I honestly haven't paid enough attention to Swift's award show speeches to provide any kind of counter-argument to your point. If she does play up the "little ol' country artist" angle, then, yes, that's disingenuous. Does it have any bearing on how I perceive her recorded output? Not really. I've always thought of her as more of a pop act anyway, and this album pushes her even farther in that direction.

There's some degree of reciprocity to the arrangement, though: Because she's such a huge draw, it benefits to mainstream country establishment to keep her within their fold for however long she's willing to stay there, since she can draw attention in a way that not many other contemporary country stars can. I said in my comments for the Nashville Scene country music critics' poll for the last two years that I'd love to see some actual market research about whether or not Swift is actually bringing new fans into country music in the way that many people have claimed, but I don't think there's any getting around the fact that she's been the genre's most visible face for the last couple of years, whether or not she really represents country music in a traditional sense.

And I tried to give the Sugarland album another shot and actually liked it even less now than I did a month ago.

@ Kari

You're one of the few people ever to refer to one of my reviews as "too kind," so thanks for that! I can't agree that Swift's songs don't sound like radio singles: It's pretty easy for me to imagine anyone from Paramore to Rihanna to Katy Perry to Pink to Kelly Clarkson to Sara Barielles to Colbie Caillat covering the songs on this album without changing a single aspect of their production and then having top 40 pop hits with them.

I do, however, agree that the lyrics to "Mean" are not good. At all. And I do think that Swift's songs are constructed more effectively than "A Little More Country Than That." Corbin is a fine enough singer, I suppose, but there isn't a whole lot more substance or creativity to the way that song is structured than there is to any of the seemingly hundreds of songs that have come out in the last five years that are simply *lists* of things that sound vaguely "country" or "rural." Corbin's song may be a slightly better variation on that type of song construction, but it's not anything I would go to bat for.

Put another way: There isn't a distinct point-of-view to "A Little More Country Than That," in that literally anyone could have written or performed it. Whether or not someone likes Swift's songs or how she sings them (both of which are entirely fair things to like or to dislike), I think she at least has a unique voice as a songwriter (and...well, a "unique" singing voice, too), and she knows how to write melodies and hooks that are more immediate and more memorable than those of the Corbin single. I can personally *identify* more with the images of Corbin's single than to any of Swift's songs, but I don't think that, in and of itself, makes it a better song.

I have to say that this comment thread has not necessarily gone in the direction I thought it might, and that's a pleasant surprise.

TWB on December 9, 2010, 07:31 AM

I disagree this album is really good. I know her vocals are not something to pin for but she clearly has improved her vocals, as evident in songs like back To December. And for lyrics, i think they are brilliant, better than many older veteran lyricists in the industry today. And Nathan Chapman has done some great producing in tracks like Back to December, Long Live, Speak Now and The Story of Us. I also disagree with people saying this is not a country album because most of the song have country accents in it, from which one can clearly say this is a country crossover album.

MamaInVT on January 7, 2011, 04:42 PM

I am a Mom of a Taylor Swift CRAZY 8 year old little girl....

That being said, I've been sucked into enjoying her albums for a few years now by said daughter. I have my favorites of hers, I'll admit it.

I found myself with mixed ideas about Speak Now.

My knee jerk reaction upon first listening to Speak Now was that someone rolled Avril Lavine, Nora Jones, Lisa Loeb, and Letters to Cleo up into this one Album. I was disappointed for my daughter who said "Mom, this doesn't sound like Taylor!!".

My biggest outrage was that the CD is cleary not country in any capacity, I will be fumed to see her get country awards for this album as will any of the other real country vocalists who will be beaten by her.

I found the songs themselves to really hit home with me on many personal levels and at times I had to turn off the CD. It is refreshing to see her writing something other than fairy tale material and I really like "Never Grow Up", "Back to December", "Speak Now", and "Last Kiss"...

Does anyone else have a hard time with the final track: "Long Live"?

Everytime I hear it I think of the Black Eyed Peas and "I Got a Feeling"!

JAM1993 on March 14, 2011, 04:43 PM

Dude, you're an idiot. This album is amazing. Why don't you try listening to the album without your cynical earplugs in? (Btw, she CAN hold a pitch consistently, and the critics who slammed her are @ssholes, like you. I'm sick of all these half-wits who call themselves "critics" when they don't know what real music or real talent is.)

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